Creative Writing Thursday
The hands of time hold us with care.
Oh if time was not a cost
If times that pass were never lost
If things which come to us each day
Would not slip through – fall away
If activity did not hold the grains of time
Then forever would remain to shine
But time is reality so we must admit
To the hands of acknowledgement always submit
But in the reality of all these grand schemes
Forever keeps happiness - knowing these things
For the hour may be late the words may be flowing
But it is to bed that we must now be going
But tomorrow will bring another day
Of what will be happy blissful eternity.
And while it may be that times have passed
Again again it will always last
To create recreate experience again
Its never thinking of what was then
For a greater joy is what comes now.
Even if to reality we must submissively bow.
Comments
That's really pretty Jeremy. :) Good job. :)
Posted by: Kristen | July 6, 2006 10:22 AM
I really enjoyed reading that Jerm! I felt like i was reading thoughts that i have but no words to describe.
Posted by: Jillian | July 6, 2006 11:33 AM
Cause he couldn't get a date. Aha. Aha. Aha. . .ahem.
Posted by: Javann | July 6, 2006 01:55 PM
After reading your beautiful poem, I watched the princess diaries and cried myself to sleep.
Posted by: Murf | July 11, 2006 11:59 AM
TO EXPRESS THE EMOTIONS OF LIFE IS TO LIVE. TO EXPRESS THE LIFE OF EMOTIONS IS TO MAKE ART. - Jane Heap
Posted by: Becky | July 12, 2006 10:01 PM