Creative Writing Thursday
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For the one who has been Hawed
Tenacious pains from inside
With my mind they will abide
Hoping for them to subside
But ever within they do reside
Making them change I have so tried
Which mind is it that has now lied?
I ever want it to be true
The problems feelings be so few
These things inside are not new
It?s the ocean that is always blue
To know that we both have a clue
What is it that I must do?
Hope and prospect is what I need
On positive thoughts to always feed
And that is what I hope to seed
The expansion of joy I want to breed
Laughing and Smiles never bleed
But maybe reality is we all need greed?
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Foolish you silly me,
silly girl foolish boy.
Up to no good and its killing me.
She went from kind to coy,
and somehow she ended up away.
He feels bad because he stayed.
But then he remembers why,
and she seems destined to try,
to test him and what he is.
She wanted so badly to be his,
he wanted to take it slow,
now somehow she knows,
why he didn't speed things up.
Mistakes she made,
Mistakes he made,
mistakes will be made,
His on the pedestal, hers hidden
swept under the rug bleached from sight,
his body dead worm ridden,
hers alive breathing but not quite
how she imagined this victory to be.
He lives again, she dies for good.
She gave up, he never stopped,
and that's the difference in the end.
Posted by: Unapologetically Javann | August 27, 2005 04:50 PM
I was touched by the thought of tenacious pains deep inside. I too feel ... sorry I got to go poo
Posted by: D Hartnagle | May 22, 2006 04:53 PM