Creative Writing Thursday
Terpitude
The thoughts overwhelming
takes my mind
Digging deeper looking through
what I find
Hoping for explicit answer
for my thought
Rigid bondage of self
is where I’m caught
I look ever deeper
to understand my way
Dig ever deeper for
the words that I say
I think of turning hither
to another world
But stiffness creeps within me
I cant be hurled
To rise from this slumber
overlaying me
What could cause this error
from which I try to flee
It doesn’t matter what I desire
for I’m trapped inside
Living with thoughts and feeling
I wish had died
Add yours....
Comments
I got mad delivery skills,
Please believe they pay the bills,
What you know about me Brown?
Because if we have a showdown,
in the end this'll be my town.
You want to cut me off in traffic?
because you have to deliver one package,
You can go ahead before me,
Cause I got that one plus another forty.
Oh look, two doors opened how nice how cute,
We keep it real with A/C cause we're just that cool.
Don't get me wrong, this isn't a brown diss,
well, yeah, actually, really it is,
Because I'm number one and rising,
and our service is surprising,
there's no comparison,
so stop comparing son,
I'm F-E-D space E-X,
while you're competing for second, we're already the best.
Catching up to us is just a pipe dream,
Fed Ex controls this delivery scene.
Posted by: Unapologetically Javann | June 9, 2005 12:20 PM
That was good Javann....Hey Josh that looks like a challenge to me!
Posted by: Ana | June 9, 2005 01:34 PM
Ana is like the kid on the play ground tryin to get to people to fight...
Why dont u jump in Ana? maybe a poem on i dunno taxes.
Posted by: itzjerm | June 9, 2005 02:22 PM
What can Brown do for me?
Apparently delivery packages with lack of speed.
I used UPS just once
And now I know they just a front
For a lame, package delivery service
That makes people with important packages nervous
Will it be here on time?
"I don't know"
"Turn off the lights and I'll glow"
UPS, you're the Vanilla Ice of the delivery scene
Please step off and let Fed EX do there thing.
Why is this rap such a mess
Because I work for UPS
We don't have any skills
I just work there to pay the bills
Posted by: I wish I were Fed Ex | June 9, 2005 02:52 PM
Oh I dont know, I am not much of the poem writer...
Now I am like the little kid at the playground going home to cry to her mother because I called out for being a trouble maker.
Posted by: Ana | June 9, 2005 02:52 PM
sure ya can.. i think anyone can write...u just have 2 try.
Posted by: itzjerm | June 9, 2005 03:17 PM
"UPS, you're the Vanilla Ice of the delivery
scene"
Oh that is beautiful. . .
Posted by: Unapologetically Javann | June 9, 2005 03:54 PM
I once had an item shipped FedEx
When I got it I was vexed
For it was torn and tattered
I was worried it was shattered
FedEx may be growing
But UPS is still showing
You get your package without throwing
And UPS trucks do not need Towing !!!
http://www.wndu.com/news/062005/news_42705.php
:)
Posted by: Becky from MI | June 9, 2005 05:33 PM
Fed EX, UPS, or DHL
Can't beat the carriers of our mail
USPS is the way to go
Rain, sleet, hail, or snow
People like Newman work for them
In a world of rocks, USPS is the gem
If y'all don't like it, to Sheol you can go
I'll get a postal worker to send you, yo!
For more on Sheol, study this weeks Watchtower lesson.
Posted by: Tre | June 9, 2005 05:57 PM
Does will smith post on here cause sounds like somebody stole a rhyme from him.
Posted by: Ummm J | June 9, 2005 11:50 PM
Yeah look who won the fight
And that's what I'll do to you Javaan if you don't
run-over a building first.
Posted by: BUFFtheUPSMAN | June 10, 2005 04:06 PM
http://www.freerepublic.com/focus/f-news/929214/posts
Posted by: BUFFtheUPSMAN | June 10, 2005 04:07 PM
Again the Numbers don't lie!!!
The companies’ financials stack up like this: UPS has annual revenues of $30 billion, while FedEx has $22 billion. But UPS has a market capitalization, or total stock market value, that's four times that of its rival: $82 billion compared to FedEx’s $22 billion.
And who is catchin up to who???
Posted by: BUFFtheUPSMAN | June 10, 2005 04:14 PM
Josh, read the entire article next time. I hate to bust your bubble:
But UPS has a market capitalization, or total stock market value, that's four times that of its rival: $82 billion compared to FedEx’s $22 billion. UPS trades at twice the price-to-book ratio that FedEx does. Those numbers have convinced analysts like Broughton that UPS is over-priced.
"I give the advantage to FedEx,” said Broughton. “It's more entrepreneurial, more willing to take risk. And the model it's employing should produce better operating margins for it and steal the premium yield from its competitor, UPS."
So in closing, UPS sucks. FedEx doesn't. But I don't have time to keep arguing this.
Posted by: Unapologetically Javann | June 13, 2005 02:00 PM
What you got more buildings to run into? Javaan has to take everything so seriously. So say what you want, you won't get no more responses from me.
Posted by: Buff | June 13, 2005 09:15 PM
ok boys...where's the creative writing?? Now your just arguing...and where's the fun in that?
Posted by: who and where | June 16, 2005 04:15 AM
I apologize. Sorry guys!!!
Posted by: Buff | June 20, 2005 06:13 PM