Misconstrued Thoughts : Yesterday's Misconstrued Thoughts Today

we don't want your bible talk jeremy; we want elbert!

It

I'm trapped; no escaping this madness.
Why did I decide to wear this dress?

Slowly and gently It falls on this genius that surrounds me.
But It's lifeless. It can't move, talk, hear, or see.

Back and forth in repetitive motion.
Alone and hypnotized by this beautiful potion.

No one can control It's speed or direction.
So It carries me away to thought's resurrection.

It is an art of Its own state,
That nobody can re-create.

Pouring madness of beautiful lifelessness.
An explanation of guessing randomness.

...so what do you think this poem is about :)??

well i'd guess water, could be the ocean, a lake, maybe even a river...

hmm am i right?

Jerm

ahh, so very close! but a little more...

it's really a silly poem huh? ha ha

no i dont think its silly had good word flow... and well its making me think.. hmm ... more...

uh well how about looking at a lake or ocean while in meeting clothes :0)

it does have something to do with water but it's much simpler than the ocean or lake...

do you want me to just tell you? it's a pretty ridiculous poem hehe

My guess is it is either about someone on a sinking ship... or else about clothes in a washing machine ;)

ha ha, i like the clothes in the washing machine:)

it's about rain... it was raining so hard i didnt want to get out of my car so i just sat there and decided to write.