Creative Writing Thursday
If It Was Then It Wouldn't Be Now
Oh if I was 10 again
I'd Build a Fort and Learn to Swim
I'd laugh and jump and skip about
Know that I should never pout
Oh if I was 8 again
I'd catch some fish and always grin
I'd laugh and jump and run around
And show everyone the rocks I'd found
Oh if I was 6 again
I'd skip and wrestle my closest kin
I'd laugh and play dusk to dawn
Fall and get grass stain from the lawn
But woe is me I'm forty three
And all those things I wish to be
But look you see I always am
6 and 8 and even 10
For I have three little tykes
So of each age I enjoy the hypes
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She says I was a microbe,
She says there is no doubt!
She says that if i'm lucky,
I might become a trout!
She says I was a gator,
She says they're quite convinced.
She says that if i'm lucky,
My kids'll be a finch.
She says I was a monkey,
She says I can't dispute.
She says that if i'm lucky,
One day I'll do cube roots.
Sarcastically Dedicated To: Edna Defore
Posted by: n8 | February 10, 2005 12:08 PM
interesting poem... fitting though
Posted by: itzjerm | February 10, 2005 12:19 PM
i think i need to work on appropriate conclusions... i think i forgot it altogether
Posted by: n8 | February 10, 2005 12:30 PM
http://www.juicemousecypher.com/bsides/gettingup.wma
A different kind of writing, yeah, but I wrote it nonetheless, yo.
Posted by: Captian Jonathan!!! | February 10, 2005 12:57 PM
Hmmm. . .this is different.
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I'm so broke I can't afford gas to get to work,
so to console myself I act like a jerk.
I yell, I insult, I deride, I sneer,
and if you gotta problem, I got the solution right here.
Mr. Left and Mr. Right
will help your mind take flight
though that'll be ironic because you'll be on the floor.
I'm also intelligent, betcha didn't know that before.
I'll also wager you've got less wit, cunning and guile,
and I'll be the judge, you just be in denial.
Oh you've got friends, they can get put down too,
Because all your friends are losers like you.
Better call the police better get your mom,
take it like man or don't and just run.
I don't care because well I just don't,
and if you think I'll step, well I just won't.
Pay attention if you want, or you can ignore me,
either way your existence will probably annoy me
just enough to tell you how I feel,
so just give me five on the low and tell me keep it real.
Posted by: What, You're Expecting My Name Here? | February 10, 2005 04:20 PM
"Pay attention if you want, or you can ignore me,
either way your existence will probably annoy me"
Thoroughly enjoyed that line Javann.
Posted by: Jeremy | February 10, 2005 05:18 PM
Yeah... that actually made me want to become a rapper Javann.
Yo Word To Ya Mother...
Posted by: itzjerm | February 10, 2005 06:11 PM
Never. . .Say. . .That. . .Again. . .
Posted by: What, You're Expecting My Name Here? | February 11, 2005 12:03 AM
oh, oh
common Jerm you can do the Vanilla ICE hightop fade..
hah
Posted by: Priddy the hut | February 11, 2005 09:47 AM