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Creative Writing Thursday

Internal Revue Service

The Growing Burning Thought within
Escaping Perplexing to say again

I thought it plain so clear to see
But others tell me its hard to be

I really thought things were so clear
The rhyme the meaning was so near

But in reality I’m not understood
And if I’m not then I could

Explain myself but that’s not me
Writing confusions thoughts that be


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I used to dream about meeting new strangers,
immune to charms and constantly in danger.
Somehow I think you've lost your way,
Somehow I think you've lost today.
They wave and they want me to be their friend,
because they know that I'm a good guy in the end.
And when I try to get away they stop me,
Because they're smart and they know me,
They know I'll go live a life unsettled.
But if they were real, they'd know better.
My life is always awry with expected nothings,
because I can never be one with the somethings.
They give me reasons that I can aspire,
and then they make me rest until I can retire.
Who can and who can't there nobody really cares,
And that's why its important to stay and not be here.

jeremy, when are you going to have lyric thursday again? I personally enjoyed that

we'll see what we can do...

or you could write your own lyrics then its creative writing eh?

To everyone:

I have just returned from Phantom of the Opera
and would like to say that it was, I don't even
have a word....
So go and see it, and if you have seen the real
live musical, you'll see that the film runs very
close to it
Now I am off to practice... and next
time you see me I will be c-walking and singing
like Christine...

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