Creative Writing Thursday
Winter Nears Say Your Goodbyes
The pain that eats me from inside
Has been present since we cried
Standing by the fresh turned soil
And why is it in life we toil
The years are fleeting
The feelings pass
And now on that soil
is fresh grown grass
I stand here reminisce of days gone by
And again it starts; I begin to cry
Thinking of how important you are
Why is it happiness is so far
The season are quickening
Feelings make me frown
And now the grass
has turn death brown
The winter chill grabs my soul
Everyday life takes a toll
In my fast pace I am caught again
Why is it I feel this is a sin?
The moments are hurried
Until we are buried
And then it is too late to say goodbye
Comments
I just can't live without you,
you just can't live with me,
I guess I'm too blind to see,
That you don't feel like I do.
Maybe I should just leave it alone,
Maybe I should just go back home,
But the more I think about it,
That's when I start to regret,
And then that when we both regress,
Will it last? You and I doubt it.
Instead of TY to create unity,
We create friction and insanity.
You make me lose my head,
I make you lose who you are,
This really won't make it too far,
Because soon we'll both be dead.
I don't mean to be emotional,
But you're just not emotional,
So why don't we give this up?
Like a kid that needs adoption,
Working at it ain't an option,
I think we already gave this up.
I'm old enough to take disappointment,
You're young enough to take disappoinment.
My wordplay doesn't excite you,
Your attitude makes me so sick,
You used to say I was so slick,
But now I can't even ignite you.
Lets just give this up.
Posted by: Javann | November 11, 2004 12:06 PM
It meant something to me
And I can't explain
What I tried so hard to be
Is what made me complain
How can I feel lazy with one spare moment
Yet have lead shoes with an hour
My lingering thoughts ferment
And my anger builds proportionally with my power
Sometimes I feel I've lost
For like other I have had to lose so many things
I'll never regret what has come at such a cost
Because one day my heart will again learn to sing
Posted by: Tracey | November 11, 2004 10:37 PM