creative Writing Thursday... Time To Be Creative Again.
Dont be afraid. Write somthin even uncreative!
Look with Marvel at the World
Growing Knowledge always ensured
For the entire world explored
As a child always take note
a reminder it is why this was wrote
Stop and look at the trees
Notice the direction of the bees
Listen to the humming of the bird
Watch the fish and its being lured
Swim below the oceans crest
For it is here you are a guest
Notice the shadow that lay on the ground
Listen to the insect - What is that sound?
To the heavens above you look
How is it man all this forsook?
Never take it all for granted
Instead to the creator/honor demanded
So ask yourself to reflect
Do the little things I detect?
This was inspired by the article on the back of the magazine we are studying right now. A great little article. Read it again. And take note! (then write some creative writing for this Thursday!)
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Imagine that you didn't exist,
would you be missed?
Would anyone shed tears if you died,
and if so, who would cry?
You think that someone cares,
if you just were not there?
You think that it'd be okay,
if you were gone everyday?
Chances are life would go on,
the feelings would decrease to none.
As soon as the dirt hit the coffin,
then you'd be gone.
And people would leave and go home,
eat dinner or sing a song,
and think to themselves they aren't alone.
because the world is packed,
with people who will step up to bat.
they'll marry your love,
And pretty soon they'll fill your glove.
Take your spot,
right about the time your body starts to rot.
But for consolation,
you have to die before anybody's imitation,
takes your spot for emulation.
Posted by: Creatively Mainstream | January 29, 2004 12:40 PM
He only forsook me a million times
But he was not attached
so therefore it was no crime
My heart i place within his gentle hands
But only to find
Deception was his plan
Needless to say my heart was broken
But carefree as it sounds
that was the token
Posted by: shee | January 29, 2004 08:15 PM
Syrup
On sunday morning i was awakened
By a smell so scrumptous my heart was overtaken
It was sweet and inviting
Thick warm and rich, syrup is so very appetizing
Posted by: sheena | January 29, 2004 08:19 PM
Shut My Mouth
There’s things I wanna say to you
but sometimes I’m afraid
like if I do it’ll ruin the way you laugh...
I’m afraid you don’t wanna talk about it
cus its all about the past
and I’m scared of screwing up again
so I shut my mouth and smile..
but, just like always you jump inside my head
and make me repeat all the things I’ve said..
there’s things you say to me
when we’re sitting in the dark
"I’m afraid I remember too much
about my broken heart"
sometimes even my mind goes blank
I recall how the only good thing in my life
I let slip away..
I’ve got nothing left to say
maybe I should run, maybe I should stay
where you belong,
I’ll be waiting there for you
to change what I did wrong
I don’t always remember all the things I said…
I’m sorry for all the things I said to you
Either way though I would’ve lost you
if I never said anything at all…
but now you have everything I need
I’m down on my knees
my life was crumbling piece by piece
but the things you said to me, I remember,
set me free…
I miss you
and the things you say to me,
its raining where I’m at
but I’ll wait.
Posted by: jasonp | January 29, 2004 09:12 PM
Thanks for the positive Sheena. I should try something positive.
I like it when the grass moves,
the wind blows by like old news,
and often times I smile,
at the playfulness of a child.
Good days come and go,
and bad days may interrupt the flow,
but ask anyone who knows,
they'll be sure to say that those,
who float in the river often sigh,
and remember then that they are alive,
and the shipwrecked kiss the ground,
thrilled with what they've found.
You see its not how life treats you,
and its really not what you do,
its how you treat life,
that should matter to you.
Posted by: Creatively Mainstream | January 29, 2004 10:27 PM
yay happy poems... yay
and anything about syrup is most excellent... good work!
Posted by: itzjerm | January 29, 2004 11:34 PM
Sometimes in life you think you are doing good,
You think everything is going great, Until.....
You get hit with the crush blow or a unforseen accurance in life.... You think to yourself how will I deal with this how will I make do..... Then you realize that Jehovah God is hear with you and by your side and that he will never change as long as you seek first the kingdom interest first.........
Posted by: Robert J | January 30, 2004 11:43 AM