The Story of Elbert has been caught up in the Editors...
But it should be out tomorrow.....
Poor Elbert, where does his future lie?
But go ahead and add your own creative writing...
Posted by itzjerm at April 21, 2005 07:44 AMwe don't want your bible talk jeremy; we want elbert!
Posted by: Autumn at April 21, 2005 08:50 AMIt
I'm trapped; no escaping this madness.
Why did I decide to wear this dress?
Slowly and gently It falls on this genius that surrounds me.
But It's lifeless. It can't move, talk, hear, or see.
Back and forth in repetitive motion.
Alone and hypnotized by this beautiful potion.
No one can control It's speed or direction.
So It carries me away to thought's resurrection.
It is an art of Its own state,
That nobody can re-create.
Pouring madness of beautiful lifelessness.
An explanation of guessing randomness.
...so what do you think this poem is about :)??
well i'd guess water, could be the ocean, a lake, maybe even a river...
hmm am i right?
Jerm
Posted by: itzjerm at April 21, 2005 10:26 PMahh, so very close! but a little more...
it's really a silly poem huh? ha ha
Posted by: kathryn at April 21, 2005 10:47 PMno i dont think its silly had good word flow... and well its making me think.. hmm ... more...
uh well how about looking at a lake or ocean while in meeting clothes :0)
Posted by: itzjerm at April 21, 2005 11:44 PMit does have something to do with water but it's much simpler than the ocean or lake...
do you want me to just tell you? it's a pretty ridiculous poem hehe
Posted by: kat at April 22, 2005 08:41 AMMy guess is it is either about someone on a sinking ship... or else about clothes in a washing machine ;)
Posted by: Emily at April 22, 2005 01:49 PMha ha, i like the clothes in the washing machine:)
it's about rain... it was raining so hard i didnt want to get out of my car so i just sat there and decided to write.
Posted by: kathryn at April 23, 2005 12:21 PM