January 20, 2005

Creative Writing Thursday

Internal Revue Service

The Growing Burning Thought within
Escaping Perplexing to say again

I thought it plain so clear to see
But others tell me its hard to be

I really thought things were so clear
The rhyme the meaning was so near

But in reality I’m not understood
And if I’m not then I could

Explain myself but that’s not me
Writing confusions thoughts that be


Add your writings....

Posted by itzjerm at January 20, 2005 07:32 AM
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I used to dream about meeting new strangers,
immune to charms and constantly in danger.
Somehow I think you've lost your way,
Somehow I think you've lost today.
They wave and they want me to be their friend,
because they know that I'm a good guy in the end.
And when I try to get away they stop me,
Because they're smart and they know me,
They know I'll go live a life unsettled.
But if they were real, they'd know better.
My life is always awry with expected nothings,
because I can never be one with the somethings.
They give me reasons that I can aspire,
and then they make me rest until I can retire.
Who can and who can't there nobody really cares,
And that's why its important to stay and not be here.

Posted by: What, You're Expecting My Name Here? at January 20, 2005 10:21 AM

jeremy, when are you going to have lyric thursday again? I personally enjoyed that

Posted by: Autumn at January 20, 2005 04:49 PM

we'll see what we can do...

or you could write your own lyrics then its creative writing eh?

Posted by: itzjerm at January 20, 2005 05:16 PM

To everyone:

I have just returned from Phantom of the Opera
and would like to say that it was, I don't even
have a word....
So go and see it, and if you have seen the real
live musical, you'll see that the film runs very
close to it
Now I am off to practice... and next
time you see me I will be c-walking and singing
like Christine...

Posted by: Tracey at January 20, 2005 11:23 PM
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