Add your creative Writing, or send a message to other life forms! (Well if they exist). Anyway the following message (poem) will be sent up by spacecraft to the Comet Temple 1 on December 2004 on an actual NASA mission. The following words will be included on a data CD attached to the spacecraft. Add your own words for other beings on this Creative writing Thursday.
Message from A Broken Planet
To all Life Forms We Think the Least
We come to you in human peace
Our hands outreached for you to shake
While our other caressed your wallet takes
We will help with whatever you need
Did We relate our persistent greed?
Yet some humans fear you'll be lured
But it is our voice that is never heard
Posted by itzjerm at January 8, 2004 08:03 AM
She is a queen,
a vision of perfection from my dreams,
I wish she was tangible reality
instead of just another mental brutality,
reminding me of yet another lost ideal,
of all my hopes that still remail unreal.
She taunts me every night,
till I finally can't sleep right.
Until the line becomes blurred,
Untill all the pain incurred,
follows me to the morning,
and then without warning,
everything I had slips away to a fain memory.
And the next night, she doesn't remember me.
No matter how hard I try,
I always make her cry
and every night she leaves part of me begins to die.
I try to tell her I don't want to go,
but every morning I awake and she's gone.
I know its not real, but if you could feel what I feel,
if every night its as if you weren't alone,
if you always hurried home,
to go to sleep,
just so you could be,
with someone who loved you for you,
tell me what would YOU do?
Most call me insane,
but I say everyone else is to blame
No one would accept me,
want me need me except me,
I mean her because she exists,
all day I'm awake and its her I miss.
But she's not real so should I cut her lose?
I'm so confused. . .
Hey Jerm,
This has nothing to do with Creative Writing Thursday but im sure everyone wants to know seeing as how you are Mr. NASA. Where are all the good pictures from Mars, all the ones on the net are boring, I know I know its against company policy to release photos to the public ahead of schedule, blah blah blah. But really you have to agree that red dirt and some rocks really aren't that exciting, maybe someone needs to have a photoshop contest to see who can fake a good pic. Pull some strings for the Misconstrued folk.
I have good news and bad news......
The good news is that i found a nickle....
And i named it Phillip.....
The bad news is that its a girl nickle......
Posted by: Deep Colors Bleed at January 8, 2004 05:25 PM